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: This is a space for anyone who wants to share their creative writing. Every couple of weeks we will post a prompt. This will be something to get you thinking! It might be part of a sentence that has to be included in your story or a picture to inspire you! If you want to take part in the challenge you have to write a post using the prompt and only 100 more words (you can use the link on the left hand side of this page to check how many words you have written). We may be able to offer the occasional prize to those that we all really like. Good luck!

Be a Super Sleuth crime writer!

Published Friday, February 24, 2012.
Last updated: Friday, February 24, 2012

 

Use these 10 words to create a 100 word story about a crime that has been committed.  If you are in Year 4 then you will have recently learnt lots of new knowedge and skills about being a crime investigator from your Science week that you can then show off in your 100 word story below!

Remember to make your story fun and creative to read!

GOOD LUCK!

 

Miss Kiri and Mr Goligher

Words to use:

Evidence, crime scene, computer, fingerprints, suspects, motive, clues, predict, arrest, question.

 

Comment By KAVIN 

The crime scene suspects were arrested at 1:00am on their bikes in front of the police station. Their home was close to the police station. The police predicted the suspects lived near the school. Also, the suspects were carrying an ICT Suite computer from Bangkok Patana School. This was the first clue that they had stolen the computer. The fingerprints matched the fingerprints on the computer and the crime scene. The police asked the suspects a question,

Published on Tuesday, February 28, 2012
Comment By Melissa Niruttinanon 4A 

This mysterious crime scene happened at my house when a strange sound woke me up in the middle of the night. The first thing and i realised that my computer was stolen. I dont know whom to suspect. No evidence was found at all. I predict it could be a stranger. Then early morning I went to report the crime to the police. He asked me a few questions and suggested that I go back home and look for clues, e.g. fingerprints. I think the motive of the thief is to get some money. Hopefully, the police can arrest the thief!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Published on Friday, March 02, 2012
Comment By Maryam 4S 

The detectives reached the crime scene. There stood all the innocent looking suspects .Detective A observed all the evidence., Detective P asked all the suspects for their motives. He turned around and peeked the fingerprints found at the crime and the fingerprints of all the suspects. Detective P had a quick chat with Detective M who was typing on the computer. Detective A held the bag with all the clues.“ I predict it is suspect B, arrest him immediatly,” Detective M told the other detectives. “ Why,” was Detective P’s question. His motive is the most unbelievable one!

Published on Friday, March 30, 2012
Comment By Jack 

Awesome stories!

Published on Friday, October 26, 2012