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: This is a space for anyone who wants to share their creative writing. Every couple of weeks we will post a prompt. This will be something to get you thinking! It might be part of a sentence that has to be included in your story or a picture to inspire you! If you want to take part in the challenge you have to write a post using the prompt and only 100 more words (you can use the link on the left hand side of this page to check how many words you have written). We may be able to offer the occasional prize to those that we all really like. Good luck!

The Ice Palace...

Published Thursday, May 12, 2011.
Last updated: Saturday, May 14, 2011

 

 

 

Part of your story should take place in or around a Ice Palace.  Remember 100 words only!

Comment By Allison  

A story from Sarah's Mum:

This place where you now row your boat was once a crisp, crunchy place, that creaked and crackled. It was cold. So cold I feared to breathe in case my throat froze. My eyes welled up, smarting in the frosty air; the tears that fell froze on my face.

It was a calm place; a stillness and a silence that took hold of my heart. Water frozen into nature’s sculpture, an ice palace.

It was a place where white foxes roamed hunting arctic hares; and polar bears gave birth and hunted from the ice sheets.

Now they are gone.

Published on Friday, May 13, 2011
Comment By Jeffrey 

One day I was walking through the
arctic when I saw something glisening
in the distance, I decided to take a closer
look. I got a close up view and it was a state of the
art hotel, it was built completely of ice.
I took a look inside and there were thousands of rooms,
I kept looking and there was even ice stairs. I went
back outside it and it was a wonderful view I could see
penguins diving into the sea and polar bears roaming the ice, I looked back at the doorway and it said the ice-palace.

Published on Friday, May 20, 2011