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Comment By Samuel 4S 

Fridays were my favourite day because school was always relaxing, but today was the weirdest day of my life. As usual, I, Poon and Santi walk to school. As we reached the school, we began to notice something was very wrong. The whole school was deserted as not a single soul was found. As we entered the Year 4 block, we found ourselves in a spaceship.
In the spaceship there were a few items. We found a wooden horse, toothpaste, a sunhat, bubblegum, jelly, automatic ion cannon, first aid kit, grenades, and a rocket launcher. I sat down in the control cockpit and saw lots of buttons on a control panel. Santi pressed a hyper-space button sending the spaceship into the sky. In a dash we were at planet Latina …

Comment By Rachel 

One bright sunny day I went outside with my friend Andrea ,a few secounds later when we was iun the lift sudenly we saw a toothpaste and a bubble gum. When we steped outside the lift suprisingly there was bublegum all over the floor!We tryed to step on the spaces that had no bubblegum,Bang!!came a sound and suddenly a horse ran out of no where folowed by a roket chasing the horse.Then BOM!BOM! came a sound from every corner and slAM slam!!came hundreds of jellys ,when I looked at my friend Andrea she was gone she was not with me the whole time!what was going on with me!!

Comment By navraj 

I walked throgh the misty streets as I saw the deserted and there was only one there.I asked the man what happend here he said he did not know he was sleeping and suddunly he woke up with a rocket taking of sound and he saw a huge horse wearing a sunhat,with his leg stuck in buble gum, with a plate of jelly balancying on his head and a mark of toothpaste on his teeth. Suddunly ther was a teryfying creature with a body like a balloon and as it came close it steped on a sarp rock and burst open and inside was a mouse.

Comment By Alice  

Do you think i need to bring my horse,bubblegum, toothpaste, jelly, sunhat, rockt?
But of course its camping so you need those things...suddenly i heard i scream it came from the loo!
It was a monster that got flashed down the loo,it was sying some sort of secret lenguage

Comment By rimako 4G 

I am in a very bad mood.My little brother is playing with a toy horse so i can't sleep.So I have to wake up.I look at the clock.3:30.I scrambled onto the floor.I landed on my sunhat.It made a loud squish noise.I looked.Under the hat was a tooth paste.I went in the bathroom.After I bathed I came out.I took out a bubblegum from a box.
I stepped on a toy rocket.Arrrgh.

Comment By Kiri Grimwood 

Was I dreaming? Was I in a trance? Had I lost my mind? I really wasn't sure what was happening to me; it was unexplainable. As I glanced out of my bedroom window I saw, to my utter disbelief, a horse lying back on my rocket shaped pool float in my swimming pool! I rubbed my eyes twice because it looked strangely like it was wearing a sunhat with a bowl of strawberry jelly on top. Suddenly it looked straight in my direction, flashed a toothy, horsey grin and said, "Have you got anymore bubblegum flavoured toothpaste I could borrow?"

Comment By Mihiro 4E 

As usual, I was woken up by my dog barking frantically at the sheep that ran out onto the field where our two horses Fire of England and Plain Jack were chasing their tails around. It seemed weird;every so often the horses would stop and have a curious look around before playing again.I remembered that today was the day that the first rocket Apollo would be leaving the ground. Excitedly I ran up to the bathroom; squeezing my jelly'o and bubblegum flavoured toothpaste quickly onto my toothbrush and nearly slipping over on my new flowery and green sunhat!

Comment By Samuel Lee 4S 

Planet Latina part 2
I quickly climbed out of the spaceship. I saw Mr Morgan limping towards Poon and I. We took out our first aid kit to help Mr Morgan, and asked him what happened to the rest of the teachers and students. He said: ‘‘the aliens put us in different cells. Everybody else is locked in cells in this building and there are aliens here. Each alien has 2 blaster rifles, an automatic ion cannon and a rocket launcher.”
Suddenly, out of nowhere, six aliens started charging at us.
Mr Morgan took the blaster rifle and shot two aliens down. I quickly reached for the ion cannon and shot another two aliens down. Santi and Poon each threw a wooden horse which exploded and made another two aliens run to escape. We broke in to their base and quickly unlocked every cell and rescued the teachers and students. We broke into the weapon room, knocked out the guards and took every weapon we could find but were very unlucky to meet the alien’s big boss. Luckily thanks to Mr Goligher’s and Mr Morgan’s quick reflexes, they shot the alien’s big boss. We quickly ran out and jumped into the spaceship to escape. We flew back to earth and had a jolly good golden time.
The End

Comment By Cream 5N 

I had a new friend. She was a really kind girl. I was her buddy and her friend. One night she invited me to her house. She had a horse and a toy rocket. We went on it several times before playing a dress up game. I wore a sunhat and she wore a crown. She showed me her chocolate flavoured toothpaste. It was so cool! Her mum made us some treats. My favourite was a large jelly with a bubblegum topping. My friend said that you could chew the bubblegum the whole day and the taste won't even change!