Patana Gateway

Comment By KAVIN 

The crime scene suspects were arrested at 1:00am on their bikes in front of the police station. Their home was close to the police station. The police predicted the suspects lived near the school. Also, the suspects were carrying an ICT Suite computer from Bangkok Patana School. This was the first clue that they had stolen the computer. The fingerprints matched the fingerprints on the computer and the crime scene. The police asked the suspects a question,

Comment By Melissa Niruttinanon 4A 

This mysterious crime scene happened at my house when a strange sound woke me up in the middle of the night. The first thing and i realised that my computer was stolen. I dont know whom to suspect. No evidence was found at all. I predict it could be a stranger. Then early morning I went to report the crime to the police. He asked me a few questions and suggested that I go back home and look for clues, e.g. fingerprints. I think the motive of the thief is to get some money. Hopefully, the police can arrest the thief!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Comment By Maryam 4S 

The detectives reached the crime scene. There stood all the innocent looking suspects .Detective A observed all the evidence., Detective P asked all the suspects for their motives. He turned around and peeked the fingerprints found at the crime and the fingerprints of all the suspects. Detective P had a quick chat with Detective M who was typing on the computer. Detective A held the bag with all the clues.“ I predict it is suspect B, arrest him immediatly,” Detective M told the other detectives. “ Why,” was Detective P’s question. His motive is the most unbelievable one!

Comment By Jack 

Awesome stories!

Comment By Callum 4S 

The floods came to Bangkok. People now have no homes and no food and no drinking water. Many people have left the city. Everyone is waiting to see how long the flooding will last. It is scary and sad. Most Thai people have lost everything they own. I am one of the lucky ones. The supermarket does not have much food or water but we got to go to Australia. You can drink water from the taps in Australia and there is lots of food. When the floods finish it will take a long time to clean it up and many people will get sick.

Comment By Divyansh Jain 4S 

When the flood started nobody expected it to be so worse as it is now. Many parts of Thailand are already drowned. Many people have lost their houses and everything they had.They have no food to eat and no fresh water to drink. People are collecting money, food, drinking water, clothes and other necessary things to donate. Schools have been closed. Many people have left Bangkok in fear. Life is very quiet, dull and sad now. I wish that the flood gets over soon and God bless all those people who have suffered due to the flood.

Comment By Mila 4S 

Whole Thailand is struggling with flods.This is very difficult time for Thai people.Lots of parts in the north are flooded,like Ayutthaya where the water reached up to 2.5m. Many people died during the floods and many houses have been swept away.
Nowdays people are stocking up food and drinking water to be prepaired in the case of flood. Some of the people who got flooded are suffering from the lack of food and water. It will have to take a long time to drain the flood water from Bankok and the suburbs. Many people are leaving Bankok to find the shelter in other provinces away from the flood. Most of the parking lots in the shopping malls are full, because people want to protect thier cars from the floods. Some cars have been parked on the highway or higher ground.
The dirty,swampy rainwater is the perfect habitat for bacteria,mosquitos and flys.Sometimes for the the crocodiles too.They can eat unespecting humans

Comment By Hugh 4A 

A natural disaster is sweeping through Thailand. Water is everywhere. Some people have died with flooding in and around their homes. Alot of people do not have water and food. The floods have destroyed peoples homes and belongings in Ayutthaya and many other provinces in Thailand. Animals have drowned including precious pets trapped in cages. A few crocodiles escaped also. Nobody knows how bad it will be. Some of Bangkok city has flooded badly. Some of the city is still dry. Where I live it is not flooded, yet, although we live next to a busy klong. I am very lucky.

Comment By Maryam 4S 

I never expected to see floods in Bangkok. The floods have caused disaster and panic throughout Thailand. Because of the terrifying floods people had to evacuate or they had to put sandbags outside their houses! Some people even put more than 200 sandbags outside their houses, like if you go to a hotel or an apartment you will see lots of sandbags. The water mostly first comes in underground places like basement or the parking area. People in my apartment even had to move their cars. Some crocodiles have escaped from a crocodile farm! So please everyone watch out and stay safe!

Comment By Sithi 4H 

This is the worst flood Thailand has ever had. The flood is getting worse everyday with more water flooding people's homes. There is not enough money for people to buy food, water and clothes. People should try to donate money and food as much as possible. Many people have lost their homes and are staying in small shelters with thousands of people. Some people are still stuck in their homes with little children crying away day and night, thinking that they might die. The hospitals are full and some closed. Even the airport is covered in water. The water is slowly coming into bangkok city so stay safe and do not panic. We will help each other get through this.

Comment By Flora 4E 

Water is seeping through Thailand because there has been so much heavy rain for three months. The floods started in the north of the Thailand and the water needs to drain out into the sea. There is so much water and the rivers and khlongs are not big enough so that water is filling to the top and overflowing. Some areas are underwater. People are very worried. There can be dangerous animals such as scorpions, crocodiles and snakes. Lots of people have lost their homes, don't have anywhere to live and don't have enough food or water. Quite a few factories have closed because of the ferocious threat Thailand is facing. There sandbags nearly all over the city. It makes me feel a bit worried for other people.

Comment By Nimit 4S 

The Flood
It is the worst flood to happen in Thailand in half a century. Millions of people got affected because their houses got covered in water, schools and factories are closed. Many cars are parked on a higher ground to avoid damage. The situation is very scary because lots of dangerous animals like crocodiles and snakes escaped from their farm. A lot of people have left Bangkok. We should help people by giving them food, fresh water, things they need and that are useful for them. I pray to god that everything becomes normal and hope such disaster doesn’t happen again.

Comment By Mitthil 4H 

The people in the east, north and west of Thailand are in danger because of the massive flood that has come from the heavy rainfall. Their homes are flooded with 1 metre to 3 metres of water. On the television, I saw that somebody invented a safety cut duck to warn people to shut their electricity if there is an electrical leak in the water. The light on the duck will turn red when that happens. In the news they have shown that people have no food or water left in their homes and have to wait for the boats to send food to their homes. Their pets and other stray dogs are also dying from the flood and the crocodiles that are in the water.

Comment By Melissa Niruttinanon 4A 

The Flood!

I would first of all call myself very very fortunate to have not experience or seen flood. I never knew that flood could be such a disaster! I see alot about flood on TV and it makes me really sad. I felt very upset when I saw old and sick people being evacuated from their homes.I cant imagine the water level being upto 2-3 meters high!I believe there has been too much rainfall this year which has caused the overflow of water.Its nearly 2 months now since flooding has started in Thailand and is still spreading around everywhere.I hope it does not come to the inner areas of Bangkok. I want to help as much as possible and I just hope this flooding stops soon and Thailand is a happy and safe place for everyone!

Comment By Melissa Niruttinanon 4A 

A POEM ON FLOOD!!

Flood flood you’re all over the place,
Come on people there’s no time to waste.
I’ve never seen so much water gushing,
And at the same time people rushing.

The roads are blocked,
And we are all shocked.
Will you come again tonight?
Even during the star- light?

You are in the town and in the city,
Oh no! It is such a pity.
Flood flood please stay away,
We want to go out and have a play!

Comment By John 4A 

The flood has come to Bangkok. Everyone is ready for the worst. When the flood comes to their houses, they have to move to other places. I saw some children swimming in the flood on TV. Some people died and get sick. Poor people get even poorer. Thai people safeguard the underground train stations by building sandbags. Some people leave to other countries or other provinces. I hope everyone doesn't get sick from the flood and their houses get dry. Finally, I wish all the water in Bangkok to be drained out soon.

Comment By Nimit 4S 

The Flood

Water-water everywhere,
So many sandbags here and there,

Dirty water is all around,
Stinky smell with a splashing sound.

Water-water everywhere,
People are stuck here and there.

Everything is about to sink
Still there is no water to drink.

God please help them out,
So many people have no way out.

We should save our world together,
As the time doesn't come back ever.

Comment By Roshita 4M 

As the floods came to Thailand everyone stores up water. The water is desperate to free and destroy our houses. People are scattered like coins fell from a purse to save themselves from the water. Crocodiles are escaped and attacking people. Snakes are also escaped and there is a scare that they would bite people. They are also stalking up food. Will the floods come to Bangkok.

Comment By Mihiro 5O 

The flood approached the kingdom of Thailand. Everyone is sufferring and there is little water, food and living sources like our houses. The flood will take time to clear but our king, the majisty has a great plan and he thought about that using animals. It will take time to let the flood clear out but gladly it is not such a big problem like an avalanche or a storm. Eveyone hopes each other is safe and has a home but that unfortunatly for some people is not possible. We are lucky that Bangkok Patana School did not get flooded so we can help the people who are in danger.

Comment By Roshita 4M 

My breath stopped,my eyes were wide. My heart beat grew faster as a rocket flying through space. I was sweating as fire around me, I was nervous. My legs were shivering.I was thinking whether I could do it or not.
I was stressed out because of my team. I closed my eyes and gave my best shot and GOAL!!!!!! I couldn't believe myself that it was a goal

Comment By Anushka 4W 

One day, Anushka and her friend were playing Rugby world cup. They were in the finals. Their team score was 0 and the other team score was 4 and there were only 3 minutes left. Finally, It was end of the game. We try hard but we lost but still it was fun.

Comment By MATTHEW 4G 

I was at the rugby world cup! the rugby ball was flying back and forth and the players takled like bulls suddenly the other team grabed the ball and ran round all the players and touch down the the score was 12 to 15 i cheered the team on i couldnt wait till the next match when all of a sudden the ball came flying at me and hit me under the chin and bounced of like a frog thats just been let out of its cage. A few hours later the next match started i cheered england on and then the allblacks emerged from there chamber and the supporters for there team cheered.

Comment By Luke 

Electricity buzzed through the stadium. Only 4 minutes were left and the score was 14 - 14. We couldn't afford to lose. We were in possesion, 20 metres from the line. It was extremely tight but play went on - I got the ball, missed one person, then another. I jumped; I dodged; and still I couldn't be caught. I was proceding towards the line. Without fail, I dived. I was motionless. I was levitating through endless green space. I paused. I looked up. I saw - what definetely looked like - victory and I was the hero! Namibia has won the World Cup!

Comment By Ethan 7G 

Eden Park was heating up with excitment. McCaw had just given away the all-important penalty. As the manager pointed at me i was initially filled with relief but as i remembered where i was the stern truth came over me. 6-6, 79mins. What could i do? As i stepped back i knew this was what i was here for. As the ball sailed through the air i saw it curve away. My heart pounded. Sweat poured down my drowning face. Smack, it hit the post and as the wind lulled it through i felt joy seep over my whole body.

Comment By Oliver 6M 

My dad proudly showed me his new invention when I woke up, the supersize machine! His huge smile rippled across his face. I congratulated him and jogged down the stairs to eat my breakfast. My mind expanded and thought of what I could do. I had a strange feeling when I arrived at school, my stomach exploded with butterflies. I walked into the classroom and suddenly it appeared in front of me a walking, talking human sized calculator, my jaw dropped like rock my throat was dry. My eyes exploded and my heart was beating terribly fast. I was frightened.

Comment By Cassandra Teigen 6M 

Amanda slept through the whole entire lesson except for when the teachers called her name. I had to stay alert and tell her what was going on time to time. I have to whisper answers into her ear. Now you might call this cheating! The only lesson she is always fully awake was maths. She was in the highest group and I was not in the lesson. Now I know how she kept this up. She was trying to pursuade me to cheat! I went to bed and suddenly it appeared in front of me a walking, talking, human-sized calculator.

Comment By Mine 6T 

After another horrid day at school, I trudged home with my black-and-blue bag trailing behind me, scratching the pavement and tearing itself apart. I had failed the maths test today. The thought did not help me trying to forget the burden that still clung to poor shoulders.And as I turned the corner, I looked up and suddenly it appeared in front of me a walking, talking human sized calculator! I whooped with joy! Being the duaghter of an inventor, I whipped out the Shrink-o-matic and zapped it and pulled it into my schoolbag. Acing the math test, oh yeah!

Comment By Cream 6T 

My heart pounded as I stepped into the light. I let out an earsplitting caterwaul as the light sucked me into the room. For what seems like years, I felt solid ground under my feet. My knees buckling, I ventured into the classroom. A giant-sized chair hurried past me with a smile on his face. This must be a dream. But the thought faded as soon as a pencil, which is as tall as a giraffe, and suddenly it appeared in front of me a walking, talking human sized calculator with his friend, a 30 centimeter ruler. What is really happening?

Comment By Roshita Anandani 4 M 

On a one dreadful Wednesday evening I was in my Kumon class doing silly addition problems,scratching my head all over.I was stuck in monotonous problems and wished if I had a calculator which can make my task easier and quicker and I can flee away from this class.All of a sudden , What do I feel-- The ground was shaking as if it was an earthquake.I was petrified and suddenly it appeared in front of me a walking,talking human sized calculator...My jaws dropped and I pinched myself to know whether I was day dreamin??It was a real calculator which I can only see

Comment By anushka 4W 

One day, I was walking around my house. I saw something very strange it become bigger, bigger and bigger. Suddenly, it appeared in front of me walking, talking human sized calculator robot. I was astounded! It asked me a help ‘‘save our planet before it kill by the evil crab king’’. ‘‘who is crab king?’’ asked anushka. ‘‘The crab king tries to kill everybody in our planet and make the powerful tablets that contains our powers’’answered the robot. The next day, I went in the robot’s roket.10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1 go. The robot showed me the crab king. I gave my cheese sandwich to the crab king. ‘‘I will go away from this planet if you give me more cheese sandwiches. I gave him more cheese sandwich. At last, crab king left the planet and all the robots were save.

Comment By Roshita Anandani 4m 

However as I walked into my new classroom I couldnt believe my eyes because in front of me was there was a sparkly ,shiny and an enormous robot.It was sharing candies with other children and my teacher.The candies were mouth watering,delicious and as sweet as sugar.My main attention was on the robot as he had twinklyO stars on him.The children were rolling all over him .All of a sudden what do I hear 'Beep', 'Beep' . The robot told that it had to go back to space and waved goodbye to all of us. And it vanished into thin air...

Comment By Ella 4G 

123,open your eyes!Lights shined as sun streamed through the hard tough windows.My eyes pored into the new amazing classroom.Mabey it was not so bad going back to school on the first day.For me a bright, beautiful dream just came true.The ceiling sparkeled like stars on a clear night.Tabels shimmered,the teacher was kind and loving.Feeling confident I walked up to my freinds and glared at them like I had never seen them before. I loved being here more than anything!

I was walking down the corner of the 'ACM centre'. I wondered what it would be like to win the treasure of guessing what ACM stands for. I was still thinking about it when I saw a paper stuck halfway in the wall. I knelt down to get it. It said 'association of castle museums'. It was amazing! I had found a mysterious code that read: You have found treasure. I went back to the office and told the people my guess. They said I had guessed right! So they gave me the most-ever-wanted treasure chest from King Arther's castle!

Comment By Samuel Lee 4S 

My Treasure
One day, as I was walking home from school, a shinny object caught my attention. It was a scroll.

I unrolled and flipped it and it was amazing! I had found a mysterious code that read:you have found treasure.

I looked around and found no treasure as in gold or silver.

But one thing I know, every day I am walking home to a home sweet home filled with love and happiness. That’s my treasure!

Comment By Cream 5N 

Homesickness flooded me. I was alone with Jen. They had forced us to walk the plank. Luckily, Jen and I had swam for our lives and found this island.
I lay on the sand, my musles screeching in pain; my lungs screaming for air. I was exhausted. Finally, I opened my eys and prodded Jen awake. We explored the island and we found the cave. At the mouth of the darkness, I spotted something on the wall. It was amazing! I had found a mysterious code that said: You have found the treasure. Maybe my disgraceful life isn't that bad!

Comment By Mackenzie 4W 

Recess had just passed, and Joy didn’t feel like returning to class. She wondered what Myron had seen in the basement that had spooked him and decided to explore for herself. On her way down she found a flashlight. She shone it on the wall and found a code. She heard a crunch. Underneath her foot was a piece of paper which said ANSWER. Now she knew what the code meant. Slowly she opened the big metal door in front of her and saw a person’s shadow. It hissed the code “Enter if you dare: This is Mrs Gorf’s lair.”

Comment By Duncan 4R 

'How do I break into this safe?' the robber wondered.He had tried everything-hammer, picklock, guessing random code words.Still the safe remained stubbornly shut. There must have been at least a thousand pounds in there! If he didn't crack the code soon the owners of the house would come back and catch him red-handed. Which was particuarly unfortunate as the residents were policemen. Just as this unpleasant thought crossed his mind he looked out the window and saw a police car pull into the garage. He heard voices and the front door opening.One last try. SAFE. Jackpot.

Comment By Ella 4G 

What is inside this box ? I eagerly tried to open the rusty brown lock. However it wouldn't budge and I realised I would need a hammer. Secretly tucking the box under my t-shirt I quickly tiptoed down to the basement to search for something to help me. I knew I wasn't supposed to look in my Mum's wardrobe, but I just couldn't help being nosey. Grabbing the heavy hammer off Dad's workbench I smashed it against the lock. It cracked and flew across the floor. Peering inside I found a note that said: The treasure is hidden somewhere far away!

Comment By Rachel 4G 

Finally I found it, my quest was over, Finding all those items to combined them all together it will be all of your dreams to come true.But for some dreams won't come true. In this life there is noting far and noting free all has a price and I give this to you for all the things I owe you and this is what I achive to give to you.Once in a while people disereve something and now is the time.

One time I earned money on Club Penguin by ice fishing. I caught 60 fish, then I saw the giant mullet coming! And I was really eager to catch it but I didn't know how so I tried using normal bait. No luck. I knew I couldn't catch the giant mullet that way. I tried everything from refreshing the screen to buying new fishing rods but nothing worked. At last I realised if the small worm bait didn't work, maybe it could catch a small fish to be bait for the giant mullet. Finally I found it, my quest was over!

Comment By Samuel Lee 4S 

The Stranger part 2
“Bye dad, bye mum,’’ I shouted across the room as they left. Suddenly a stranger appeared and said: “keep this token safe and beware of the black tiger.” This is the fourth time this man had appeared to me. I wonder what was so special about this token. Then, I noticed a note left on the table and it said:”please read the back of the token.’’
I quickly read the back of the token aloud it said to pull the sword out of the stone. Suddenly a gold speck of dust fell from the sky and a sword in a stone appeared before my eyes. I followed the instructions to pull the sword out of the stone. The stranger appeared again and said “time portal! Move it!’’ Suddenly a sleepy face appeared saying “where shall we go majesty?’’ He said: “Lava world and the time portal suddenly turned bigger and went off with a loud boom!! I found myself in Lava world.
The stranger then said:”and now for your second test, defeat the black tiger.’’ I jumped out of the portal and struck at the black tiger that was guarding a topaz. I missed and I did another strike and this time succeeded in hitting the tiger dead. The stranger shouted out to me to pick up the Topaz which the black tiger was guarding. I grabbed the topaz. Finally I found it, my quest was over.

Comment By Enaara 4G 

Charlie was lying down on his bed.... suddenly he was in another world. He started walking around, he turned around. Someone was following him, “My name is Tomas” the boy said. They walked together. Charlie started noticing that nobody had to pay for things it was free. Suddenly Charlie just ran off to the candy store he started grabbing all the yummy candies and put them in his jacket. The people didn’t mind, they were very kind. After a few minutes Charlie found his self back on his bed, he realised it was all just a dream. He wrote about it and called “JOURNEY OF KINDNESS”.

Comment By Sarah L. 6B 

Gradually making their way through the foliage, the three apprentices trudged on. A constant stream of complaints flowed steadily from their mouths. This was cut short by a glimpse of what could quite possibly be sunlight! For the first time in months, the youngsters sprinted out into the open air, concealing their eyes behind quivering hands for fear of the rays blinding them. To advance through the novice stage into a powerful warlock was a huge achievement. One that could only be accomplished by performing a truly kind deed to a towns person. They succeeded.Unfortunately with several broken limbs.

Comment By Arnav 4G 

Suddenly I felt my bear feet in a cold place I looked around but I couldn't see my own bedroom I wondered why I was here? I heard a voice it wasn't scary it wasn't so sweet it sounded like a random person speaking to me I felt a bit scared. I also remember that I am not allowed to speak to strangers so if I did then I could get in some serious trouble but then the voice came closer so I could hear it and it ended up being a journey of kind because I got this feeling.
Journey of Kindness

Comment By Charlotte 4G 

THE JOURNEY OF KINDNESS
It was a very,very,very hot day Lily wished it would snow and suddenly a purple wind picked her up and put her down in a white room she still wanted it to snow.Then the wind blew and the white room was gone and she was in a winter wonderland then she wished for some hot coco, then the wind blew again and a stand appeared ,a hot coco stand Lily did not have any money then a sign appeard it said

Comment By Momiji 4G 

When I woke up in the middle of nowhere I was terrified! In front of me was a note that said” Dear Brave One, Lordon (Master of darkness) is back. He has captured Shimmer the shimmering unicorn along with Queen Glitter. Please help them or else Kindness Island will be miserable and if you do not rescue them, our island will have no joy and we will lose our kindness. From Prince Eduard” I was confused? Shimmer the shimmering unicorn, Kindness Island, what is this prince talking about? Suddenly I heard a man talking to me “Are you the girl who is up for the Journey of Kindness?

Mike was walking down the street and spotted a little kid using an annoying radio so he grabbed the radio and threw it in the bin. The little girl started crying but Mike just walked away. Exactly when he started walking away from her, the girl’s mother came out and started shouting at Mike for being mean. When the girl’s mum let Mike walk away, he didn’t think that conversation was quite nice. He realised on the way home that if he had been nicer then he wouldn’t get shouted at. He returned to the girl and apologized to her.

Comment By Ling Ling 4G 

“Whoa where am I!” Mr. Hyde exclaimed. He seemed to be in a swirling vortex. Suddenly a voice echoed around the vortex. “ I brought you here to show you the journey of kindness,let this be a good lesson to you.”

“This is you when you were young, you would never share your toys” Though you probably didn’t realize it, we punished you for it by breaking your toy the next day. Now do you see how bad it is to be unkind?

Mr. Hyde jerked awake and shook his head “Is this all a dream?” he thought, puzzled.

Comment By isaac wong 4G  

One day there was a man who was dreaming about a story called [Journey of Kindness].There once was a man standing in front of me and he said [are you ready yet ?] i said [no i am not ready yet].He dragged me into the gate.I said [that is a shiny gate] and there was a title saying [The Journey Of Kindness].We entered into it and we found a piece gold which represent the journey.We rushed into he king's palace and said [we believe this belong's to you] so he said [thank you indeed i think you deserve a reward].

Comment By Alannah Guiney  

Journey of Kindness John was playing with his friends Nick, Jacob, Samantha and Maria they were playing hide and seek Jacob was it. John went behined a fence and he saw a deep whole and called everybody John fell in and everybody followed he ended up in his house but nobody was there he saw a note saying bye bye John he through it out and ran outside he was very scared he did not know what was going on then his freinds came theyalso was very fritend no one was in the village only 1 person his name was goregey the king of banjos he told John and his friends what happend then he said

Comment By Samuel Lee 

The Journey of Kindness
Today I woke up feeling better than I ever felt. As I stood up, I saw a time portal. There was something engraved on the time portal: “The journey to kindness’’. As I stepped out of bed, I felt very dizzy and weird. I felt like I was flying! Suddenly, everything stopped. I stepped out of the portal and found myself on a beautiful island. There were many people of all shapes and sizes in the island. Some were huge and tall, whilst others were tiny and short.
I was amazed by the number of different sizes of people. As I walked further, different sizes of people came to greet me. They gave me fruit, food and all sorts of things. Indeed, this was truly the ‘‘ journey of kindness.’’

Comment By Samuel 4S 

Fridays were my favourite day because school was always relaxing, but today was the weirdest day of my life. As usual, I, Poon and Santi walk to school. As we reached the school, we began to notice something was very wrong. The whole school was deserted as not a single soul was found. As we entered the Year 4 block, we found ourselves in a spaceship.
In the spaceship there were a few items. We found a wooden horse, toothpaste, a sunhat, bubblegum, jelly, automatic ion cannon, first aid kit, grenades, and a rocket launcher. I sat down in the control cockpit and saw lots of buttons on a control panel. Santi pressed a hyper-space button sending the spaceship into the sky. In a dash we were at planet Latina …

Comment By Rachel 

One bright sunny day I went outside with my friend Andrea ,a few secounds later when we was iun the lift sudenly we saw a toothpaste and a bubble gum. When we steped outside the lift suprisingly there was bublegum all over the floor!We tryed to step on the spaces that had no bubblegum,Bang!!came a sound and suddenly a horse ran out of no where folowed by a roket chasing the horse.Then BOM!BOM! came a sound from every corner and slAM slam!!came hundreds of jellys ,when I looked at my friend Andrea she was gone she was not with me the whole time!what was going on with me!!

Comment By navraj 

I walked throgh the misty streets as I saw the deserted and there was only one there.I asked the man what happend here he said he did not know he was sleeping and suddunly he woke up with a rocket taking of sound and he saw a huge horse wearing a sunhat,with his leg stuck in buble gum, with a plate of jelly balancying on his head and a mark of toothpaste on his teeth. Suddunly ther was a teryfying creature with a body like a balloon and as it came close it steped on a sarp rock and burst open and inside was a mouse.

Comment By Alice  

Do you think i need to bring my horse,bubblegum, toothpaste, jelly, sunhat, rockt?
But of course its camping so you need those things...suddenly i heard i scream it came from the loo!
It was a monster that got flashed down the loo,it was sying some sort of secret lenguage

Comment By rimako 4G 

I am in a very bad mood.My little brother is playing with a toy horse so i can't sleep.So I have to wake up.I look at the clock.3:30.I scrambled onto the floor.I landed on my sunhat.It made a loud squish noise.I looked.Under the hat was a tooth paste.I went in the bathroom.After I bathed I came out.I took out a bubblegum from a box.
I stepped on a toy rocket.Arrrgh.

Comment By Kiri Grimwood 

Was I dreaming? Was I in a trance? Had I lost my mind? I really wasn't sure what was happening to me; it was unexplainable. As I glanced out of my bedroom window I saw, to my utter disbelief, a horse lying back on my rocket shaped pool float in my swimming pool! I rubbed my eyes twice because it looked strangely like it was wearing a sunhat with a bowl of strawberry jelly on top. Suddenly it looked straight in my direction, flashed a toothy, horsey grin and said, "Have you got anymore bubblegum flavoured toothpaste I could borrow?"

Comment By Mihiro 4E 

As usual, I was woken up by my dog barking frantically at the sheep that ran out onto the field where our two horses Fire of England and Plain Jack were chasing their tails around. It seemed weird;every so often the horses would stop and have a curious look around before playing again.I remembered that today was the day that the first rocket Apollo would be leaving the ground. Excitedly I ran up to the bathroom; squeezing my jelly'o and bubblegum flavoured toothpaste quickly onto my toothbrush and nearly slipping over on my new flowery and green sunhat!

Comment By Samuel Lee 4S 

Planet Latina part 2
I quickly climbed out of the spaceship. I saw Mr Morgan limping towards Poon and I. We took out our first aid kit to help Mr Morgan, and asked him what happened to the rest of the teachers and students. He said: ‘‘the aliens put us in different cells. Everybody else is locked in cells in this building and there are aliens here. Each alien has 2 blaster rifles, an automatic ion cannon and a rocket launcher.”
Suddenly, out of nowhere, six aliens started charging at us.
Mr Morgan took the blaster rifle and shot two aliens down. I quickly reached for the ion cannon and shot another two aliens down. Santi and Poon each threw a wooden horse which exploded and made another two aliens run to escape. We broke in to their base and quickly unlocked every cell and rescued the teachers and students. We broke into the weapon room, knocked out the guards and took every weapon we could find but were very unlucky to meet the alien’s big boss. Luckily thanks to Mr Goligher’s and Mr Morgan’s quick reflexes, they shot the alien’s big boss. We quickly ran out and jumped into the spaceship to escape. We flew back to earth and had a jolly good golden time.
The End

Comment By Cream 5N 

I had a new friend. She was a really kind girl. I was her buddy and her friend. One night she invited me to her house. She had a horse and a toy rocket. We went on it several times before playing a dress up game. I wore a sunhat and she wore a crown. She showed me her chocolate flavoured toothpaste. It was so cool! Her mum made us some treats. My favourite was a large jelly with a bubblegum topping. My friend said that you could chew the bubblegum the whole day and the taste won't even change!

Comment By Samuel Lee 4S 

The Stranger!
One day, I was reading under the apple tree, when a stranger appeared to me and said: “keep this token safe and beware of the black tiger, beware the black tiger”. I thought in my mind, this person had appeared and said the same thing for the 3rd time. I was about to give the token back when the stranger suddenly disappears into thin air. I really couldn't understand why this was happening to me.

Comment By Tongtong 

The Mystery!!!

One day I was sitting down under a tree playing my iphone game. Suddenly!! There was an old man that gave me three magical beans so I kept them. The old man said to eat it and you will be able to fly but I didn't. I saw the old man got behind the apple tree so I ran after him. When I got to the apple tree he was gone!!! I looked for him every where but I could not find him. I ask myself that I really could not understand why this was happening to me?

Comment By Joanna Hsin 

The worst thing
This morning I was on a bus. When I was sat on the bus someone said they hope the bus ran out of gas. They didn’t like the bus. So it really stop because it is ran out of gas. Then when I was going on a airplane I saw the person again but this time I hope he didn’t say a word but then he hated the air plane and he said I hope this airplane can fly back. Then the pilot said the airplane can’t fly today then we got back to the airport and I said “I really couldn’t understand why this was happening to me”.

Comment By Arnav 4G 

Ouch! I broke my arm again! This is the 3rd time I have broken my right arm. I asked my mom I really don't know why I keep getting hurt? I moaned all day because I was really getting hospital sick. I had been to the hospital last week since I had high fever and severe vomiting and now I am back in the same hospital. Finally the nurse entered with my lunch! Cheese sandwich and mango pie! Yummy! I ate my lunch and now am having my bitter pills. I really couldn't understand why this was happening to me

Comment By Enaara 4G 

It was a bright sunny day and Chloe was looking forward to it. She woke up, the first thing she did was have her breakfast. Then she went for her shower, later she did her homework. After that she went outside to play with her friends! When she looked at her friends they were all mad at her they didn't want to play with her. So she went back inside and thought to herself

Comment By Nicholas Goligher 

I really couldn't understand why this was happening to me, suddenly I found myself in a dark hole. How did I get here? What happened? A thousand questions flashed through my mind. Suddenly I was overtaken with fear, I was petrified, I was all alone! I slowly got to my feet, my left leg felt incredibly sore, I stumbled around my new surroundings desperately trying to orientate myself. My eyes were beginning to adjust to the dark space. I thought I saw something moving in the dark in front of me. My mind began playing tricks on me, all I could think about were MONSTERS...

Comment By Prae 

I woke up at saturday morning and I went on my swing in the garden. I sat on my swing and played on the swing for a couple of minutes and then I saw some thing appearing next to me. But i was still worried that it was a real person or not, so swung my hand through it. I was very scared so I ran inside my house to tell my mum but the ghost also ran beside me and I was frightend so I just tried to ignore it but it just kept popping up in my head. I really could't understand what was happening to me.

Comment By Shrihaan, 4H 

I was walking in a park, suddenly a magnificent elf wearing a green coat popped out from the behind an orange tree. The elf said in a Scottish voice, “Where is me
pot of gold?” I said to him, “Sorry, what are you talking about?” He clicked his fingers and suddenly four more scary elves arrived, they slowly started coming towards me menacingly. I really couldn’t understand why this was happening to me. Suddenly one of the elve’s walky-talky rang, he listened briefly. He whispered to the other elves. They said sorry and hurriedly ran away in a different direction.

Comment By Luke 4G 

He had just turned the lights of when “Boom”. “What was that? Is anybody there?” Slowly and cautiously, he got out of bed and what he saw was – his little monster – or was it? So he got into and went back to sleep. Then suddenly “Boom”. “What was that? Is anybody there?” Slowly and cautiously, he got out of bed and what he saw was – a huge, colossal, immense, gigantic monster. Fortunately, the monster was next to the window (so the door was on the other side) and he jumped out of bed and ran out the door. “A Monster!”

Comment By Arnav 4G 

Suddenly this Green Ugly Monstrous Monster appeared in the Dark Creaky woods. I was freaked out of this Green thing that had deadly teeth that could easily break our small bones compared to them it is small! I fell from the tree I was badly injured and I thought that the Ugly Green Monster would bite of my head but instead the Ugly Green Monster picked me up and took me to my house I was thinking that how did he know where I lived? I still was scared of e monster event though he wasn’t biting me at all!

Comment By isaac wong  

One night there is a monster who likes to go eat humans and insects. This monster hides in the dark and lives in the dark. Whenever he sees food he quickly hides into the dark and trys to hunt for his dinner. When he grows older he gets more bigger and has more energy. When he also gets more energy he gets more tough but as he goes to earth he just wont just stop growing older and then he found a human. He chase the man as the man ran and ran. Later he hides in the dark, later he discover it weakness then he slowly on the lights and the monster starts to melt. He says i have killed the monster. THE END

Comment By Jaeyoung 4G 

One clear night, Fred and Sam went to seek a adventure. they went to the smallest valley in the world unfound to every human except for Fred and sam. They sqeezed through a hole and found themselves in a huge open space. When they fell in a trap in the middle of the open space. In the trap a group of monsters attacked. They fought back but got captured. The monsters took them to their boss. the boss said put them in the jail! what will happen next...

Comment By Samuel Lee 4S 

The scary night
“Good night mum and dad,” I shouted. I was about to sleep, when I heard a spooky voice saying, : “ open up, come in here, don’t be shy, just open this door and you will see me’’.
I responded in a shaky voice: “who…who…is there’’?
The “thing” responded: “ just open this door and you will see me’’.
I braced myself and open my closet with closed eyes and quickly shut it. The “thing” laughed with an evil laughter and said “coward, how can you see me with your eyes closed?”
These words angered and prompted me to open the closet. “Ahhhh….what an ugly monster!’’ I fainted.

Comment By Dominic 

Suddenly a monster apperd in the sky. Oh my said mom it's a this lovely monster in the air. Where mom said the Bob. But the wind was howling very hard he died HORRAY!!! said the family. Boom another monster mom. Hey dad ia this the same monster? I think it not the same monster as before.

Comment By Amanda 4G 

One bright sunny day my brother and I were on our way to catch a train to London when sudenly a big, hideous creature stol my tikets.I ran and ran after that monster tryingto get tikets. When the train stated to go.Iwasso agry at the monster that Ichased it out of the train. But then I thought of my tickets so I startedchasing it agaen. Sudenly the monster grabbed me.I then scrimed and sudenly I woke up in my bed shivering and shaking ,wahdering whereI was then I relised it was all ........just a dream.

Comment By Shrihaan, 4H 

One dark rainy night when I was cozy in my bed, I heard a soft noise. I looked out of the window. I did not see anything. So I went back to bed. After a minute or so, I heard a louder noise. I heard it clearly, it was a rustling, rumbbling noise. It must have been coming from the bushes in the forest. It was something big, it was slowly moving. I thought what it could be. The first idea which struck to me was monster! I quickly jumped into my bed. I woke up sweating, it was only a dream.

Comment By Allison  

A story from Sarah's Mum:

This place where you now row your boat was once a crisp, crunchy place, that creaked and crackled. It was cold. So cold I feared to breathe in case my throat froze. My eyes welled up, smarting in the frosty air; the tears that fell froze on my face.

It was a calm place; a stillness and a silence that took hold of my heart. Water frozen into nature’s sculpture, an ice palace.

It was a place where white foxes roamed hunting arctic hares; and polar bears gave birth and hunted from the ice sheets.

Now they are gone.

Comment By Jeffrey 

One day I was walking through the
arctic when I saw something glisening
in the distance, I decided to take a closer
look. I got a close up view and it was a state of the
art hotel, it was built completely of ice.
I took a look inside and there were thousands of rooms,
I kept looking and there was even ice stairs. I went
back outside it and it was a wonderful view I could see
penguins diving into the sea and polar bears roaming the ice, I looked back at the doorway and it said the ice-palace.